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We're Falling So . . .

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We’re falling so . . .

Falling so deep

into the pit of doom.

Our decisions so wrong,

and we’re too young to even see.

The pain we cause others,

for doing what we do.

Is inhuman in every way.

Won’t someone save us,

save us from falling?

Or will we fall forever?

We must stop and learn.

For if we don’t.

We’ll live in torment forever.

We’re falling so . . .

Falling so far from our purity . . .
A poem I wrote after I caught two on my friends smoking cegrttes(sp). They promised they would quiet, but I seriously doubt it. Yeah, I can'tname names but they're gonna get their asses wooped by me someday. Well, please leave a comment or something, please . . .
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HikariKikyo's avatar
They STILL haven't stopped?!?!?! They're dead... :fork: :ninjabattle: *gets pistol or a shotgun and goes to find them*

*stops walking and turns around to face Winry* Oh, and, awesome poem! ^^ Little sad. But I like it. ;p ^^ *thumbs up*

*turns back around and continues to search for the stupid people*